"The goal is not to sell, but a response showing an interest "
Cold Emailing is a technique you are likely to use on a daily basis if you are into sales and marketing. You need to give your prospects a clear view on the next step, but if the prospects are rolling their eyes every time they read your e-mail and are confused about your intentions then it is something to get worried about. Cold Emailing is mostly harder because you don’t have any relationship with your audience yet and you lack on the non-verbal feedback because of which most of the cold e-mails fail.
So why not think about the reasons, why your feeble language is turning them off.
Any unclear message would not captivate the prospects and won't prompt them to take the next step, I also get cold emails and based on them I would advice a few guidelines to be followed :